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i liked your story. the story feels a bit like you are scared to actually embrace how the woman is feeling. i wanted to know how she felt to be used [to give over the power]. you set the character up as having a high sex drive and willing to play with herself in a public toilet. so it seemed out of character that it was unclear whether she was enjoying her submissiveness; why not tell us explicitly how her domination by the guard affected her sexual desires?

^ A named commenter on my story. See what I mean about exposed?? The scarier thing is that I think he's basically spot-on. I've been reading (and enjoying!) nonconsent/reluctance stories for a while but actually writing them felt like a different animal.
 
I think I'm going to keep writing and posting though. On the whole it feels good to have something out there.

First story!

I just posted my first story on Literotica. I've been a semi-regular of that site pretty much since I started reading smut, but for some reason I've never submitted anything before. I guess I'm kind of proud to have published something on Lit after so long, but I also feel kind of exposed (not in a sexy way). But I suppose I've always been sexually repressed - shame is a huge part of my sexual consciousness, so I'm not really sure if this is the norm for new writers of erotica.